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Wednesday 8 February 2012

THE BUNYIP

Jamani which meant king of water turned to a forest nearby surrounded by brown barky trees. He thought he would go fishing with his new sharp, brown rod. He arrived at the dark damp forest and could hear screeching black and white koalas sat on the brown barky causing them to
bend over like a bridge!!!

Three days ago his dad had disappeared so he thought maybe his dad is here so he searched up and down left and right all around the mysterious woods. He found a dark emerald River and bottle green bushes like it had exploded like a nuclear bomb!!!!!

The forest is cool the fairly strong wind blew the dark lime green river like there was the fastest Blue fish shooting at a ridicules pace .There was sand as bright as the sun with huge white boulders hanging from the sand this was a one and truly mysterious place!!!!!!
Suddenly Jamani found a brilliant place to fish. Five minutes later Jamani caught a rare silver
fish but when he turned away a fierce red Bunyip appeared and was tempted to eat it. Quickly Jamani sprinted to the nearest cave. Out of relief the Bunyip lost him

One hour later he heard a familiar voice from the back of the cracked silver cave. It was his dad!!!!!! Suddenly the same savage Bunyip arrived at the cracked grey cave. There was a tight small hole that he could just fit through. He ran to the hole and made it through. Just then Jamani struck beautiful gold. Jamani took the gold and lived with his dad but what about the Bunyip!?

Ethan.A

9 comments:

  1. Well done Ethan you have a fantastic story .

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  2. Well done Ethan you have done a great story

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  3. Well done i liked your story Ethan from zoe.

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  4. Well done Ethan i liked your story by Zoe jones

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    1. thankyou i like that you have used noun phrases and made the story exiting

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  5. Well done ethan i love the way you write in paragraphs and your story really tells me about what is happening.

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  6. i loved your story ethan it had lots of phrases and pargraths well done

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  7. i loved your story ethan it had lots of phrases and pargraths well done

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    1. Thankeyou shaun i like that you have used noun phrases and described the story.Well done

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