The Vicious Bunyip
Amalie, meaning forest, went out for a long walk in the dark, gloomy forest.Amalie had a dark, bronzed face with hair like white, fluffy clouds. She went for a walk to get some fresh air. As she entered the gloomy forest Kookaburras laughed and squawked up high in the trees above her. Next to the path where Amalie was standing was a cascading waterfall leading into a revolting lagoon. The lagoon water was as green as emeralds glittering against the sun. Surrounding the lagoon were green, mossy rocks. Suddenly a vicious Bunyip appeared out of the green lagoon! Amalie was really scared that she started to shiver.
Later that same afternoon Kali decided that he was going to find his wife, who had never returned, He was just going to enter the dark, gloomy forest but before he could even take one step the same Bunyip who had taken his wife became face to face with him. Luckily Kali escaped the Bunyip and Kali found Amalie in a dark, gloomy cave guarded by evil, vicious baby Bunyips. Bunyip was very angry and made a deafening roar and threw Kali away from Amalie but while Bunyip wasn’t looking Kali crept up behind Bunyip and tied him up very tightly with a very strong chain.
While the fierce, ferocious Bunyip was tied up the vicious, evil baby Bunyips were closing in on Kali. The baby Bunyips could not breathe fire yet but they were experts at whacking humans with their dagger like tails. When the blue, scaly baby Bunyips were trying to set the huge adult Bunyip free, Kali quickly ran over to Amalie and untied the brown, strong rope that was wrapped around her really tightly. Just in time Kali untied the rope and set her free. All the baby Bunyips tried to hit Amalie and Kali but they jumped and ducked like they were in an obstacle race…but no it was nothing like an obstacle race it was much more terrifying. Although they finally escaped the Bunyips they kept chasing Kali and Amalie.
The tribe were puzzled when Kali and Amalie did not return when the tribe expected them to. The tribe were all thinking hard about where Kali and Amalie could be so the tribe all sat down on the damp, brown logs and decided that the whole tribe were all going to find them. After a while one person from the tribe shouted out,
“I have found them!”
Everybody else was so relieved that Kali and Amalie were safe and not injured. Also Kali and Amalie were happy because the tribe had found them. Then the whole tribe started to walk home.
Finally when they got home to their tribe they had a huge celebration party. Although mysteriously the Bunyip was never ever seen again!
Chloe D
Lovely story, very well written and kept me interested- I wanted to read more.
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I loved writing my Bunyip story it was so fun and i especially loved when we wrote it onto word and then we put it on the blog.From Chloe Dutton Jasmine Class!x!x!x!x!
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ReplyDeleteWell done Chloe d you worked hard by ZoeJones
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used noun phrases and your verbs were really powerful. matthew.O
ReplyDeleteI find chloe's story very interesting and it makes me want to read on!xx
ReplyDeleteI loved it and verry interesting and exiting
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